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_____ 1000 words .

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and none of them seem right




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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

this is an excellent concept and beautifully executed, however i have a few suggestions:
1. add some more low-lights to the chestnut's mane and tail. give it a little more dimension. also, there are a couple of rogue lines that i don't think are meant to be there.
2. it looks like the water is meant to be somewhat glowing. add more highlights to the bellies, low-lights to the backs. and shadows in the walls or something giving the light a direction.
3. the background looks more washed out than the horses. balance. :3 i think that this piece will have a lot more impact once you play with the lighting a bit. shadows and highlights will really make it pop and help us see the emotion.

i do have to say that the horses look FANTASTIC! i love how you did the markings, they look so natural. you definitely have talent. KEEP IT UP!
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